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Nail
Contributed by
jacquelynne
on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I hate you
I'd tell you of the hate I feel,
but, you wouldn't care
So now, I'll drive a nail
a long, rusted and pointed nail
through your heart
So you can feel what I feel
You always wanted a little girl
a blue-eyed, brown-haired little girl
and you left me
ironically,
the only child you ever wanted
hates you
So now I'll drive another nail
a long, rusted and pointed nail
through your heart
So you can feel
what I feel
I hate you father
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2003-08-30 20:25:00]
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Re: Nail
(User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 03:19:09 PM AEST
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| You obviously have a deep pain driven hate for your dad. I hope one day you can work out your problems. |
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Re: Nail
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by venkat on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:34:56 AM AEST
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| This a painful nail |
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