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Still It Bleeds
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Still It Bleeds
My Heart is whole,
But still it bleeds.
My mind is full,
But yet it needs.
You went away,
But not by choice.
Your body died,
But not your voice.
And yet I try,
To go on.
As your memory,
Lives on and on.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
... [
2003-08-31 21:45:00]
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Re: Still It Bleeds
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:57:45 PM AEST
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| so simple.....so true.....very painful.... |
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Re: Still It Bleeds
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 10:02:38 PM AEST
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So sweet even in it's sadness.
I'm so sorry for your loss.
God bless u,
emystar@msn.com |
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Re: Still It Bleeds
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by Rage on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 10:29:36 PM AEST
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...Painfuly beautiful...
Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: Still It Bleeds
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by WiL_CA on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 11:48:17 PM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: Still It Bleeds
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 03:32:44 PM AEST
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tis good.. a simple but effective poem.
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