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Casted Pearl
Contributed by
jaeann
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Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
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All the vices in the world
will never save the little girl
from the pillar she was hurled
all the insults have unfurled
her heart knotted up like a burl
before swine she's the casted pearl
her wins are so surreal
in a fetal she will curl
if she had a penny for every whirl
she'd be a rich little girl
in someone else's world.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-09-01 01:35:00]
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Re: Casted Pearl
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 01:43:21 AM AEST
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great write
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Re: Casted Pearl
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 02:03:12 AM AEST
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Sad, but well written....
Jenni |
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Re: Casted Pearl
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 02:54:39 AM AEST
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| I simply love reading your poems.So much heart,but so much pain.Your poems can truly be considered great. |
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Re: Casted Pearl
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by venkat on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:18:52 AM AEST
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| very sad..it is well written..venkat |
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Re: Casted Pearl
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:25:48 AM AEST
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I can relate.
Good work!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: Casted Pearl
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:16:34 PM AEST
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i liked this the rhyming, the sadness, the bitterness. It could have been a bit longer lol but I say that a lot. Great poem and thnx for your comments on mine.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Casted Pearl
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by Crow on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 10:08:19 PM AEST
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you always have me in wonder of you with your writing, conjuring an image from your
words, I like that. good work, Crow |
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Re: Casted Pearl
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by eternityandaday4u on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 12:08:45 AM AEST
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| such saddness and pain. i don't know what to say but awesome write. this is defined to me tha you feel as if the girl is societies outcast. just make sure not to be afraid to break the barrier you so painstalkingly build without realizing it!!! |
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