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don't feel
Contributed by
painted_echos
on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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you've done it girl bravo to you pushed yourself to go much farther than you've dared before bravo to you so why cry hon what do you fear afraid of going numb again or maybe that you can't what do you fear it's easy now don't feel don't wish find a friend - no, better than a friend a one night stand don't feel don't want a friend to share all that is you can't share what you don't know don't have keep to yourself then all that is you find a sweet song for you to dance in someone's arms and laugh out loud not a song to think for you to dance now try again don't feel don't wish don't go farther than it hurts you don't say that hurts you more don't feel don't want it scares you so you scream inside pushing away the moon to stop desire for the stars you scream inside why face the fear to feel to wish for more than emptiness you've known and still remain alone to feel to want
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Re: don't feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 12:30:34 AM AEST (User
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yes........bravo to you.
powerful.....telling.....don't feel ..don't wish!!!! |
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Re: don't feel
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM AEST (User
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its so hard to let
anyone close after,
and a terrible want too.
very good work, Crow |
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Re: don't feel
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 07:10:09 PM AEST (User
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it is good to honour innocence, to honor what is still pure and holy..to marvel that this automonous, glory was somehow whelped in part by us..slow decay and dead flesh, from the furnace of our lapsed vows and irredeemable appetites come our children..not bad ...daf.. |
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