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whimsical horror?!!
Contributed by
painted_echos
on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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circles
of past and present
all just rolling around
theres a mouse in my house
said the angel on my shoulder
as the shadow pushes me down
while the circles
of past and present
all just go rolling around
the first to be second
till second was first
and then there were three
what to do
what to do
who shall i be
oh, oh, youre late
but youre always late
shall you always be
theres a mouse in my house
said the angel on my shoulder
and the shadow pushes me down
into the deep
to talk to myself in rhyme
theres a mouse in my house
i shall ask him to dine
tell angel, fly boomerang up and around
now shadow, would you like to dance
who are you
i dont know
but we do
who are you
i dont know
but we do, we see
in black and white law
gray is truth
thank you madame, said the mouse
with a burp
the angel started to glow
all that i am
turns to shadow and says
care to spin, care to twirl
as the mouse took his leave
and the angel flew boomerang up and around
we danced by the light of her wings
who are you
i dont know
and neither is me
spinning and laughing
and twirling and laughing and
screaming and laughing
and screaming and
screaming
and
screaming
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Re: whimsical horror?!!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 04:48:52 PM AEST
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not sure, really
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Re: whimsical horror?!!
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by BlackFire9786 on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 06:16:06 PM AEST
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| wow, it didn't make a lot of sense at first but at the end i got a sense of going insane, or insanity, ya know, i dunno if it was meant to be that way but it was a good poem i enjoyed it Lisa |
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Re: whimsical horror?!!
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 06:45:20 PM AEST
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very interesting not totally sure about the meaning but an enjoyable read...will make me think
Shari |
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Re: whimsical horror?!!
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 12:35:57 AM AEST
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the abyss.... oh so very close.....
screaming good poem!!!! |
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Re: whimsical horror?!!
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 12:54:44 PM AEST
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| my! you and jaeann are so redhot "for lack of a better word" in your writing. this is a very, very good write. Crow |
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