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Leading me
Contributed by
Kissie1405
on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The bloody confusion in my head
In my soul
In my life
Takes me on a path
Towards a labrinth
A labrinth of love
Takes me by the hand
Shoves it into my chest
And rips out my heart
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2003-09-02 01:05:00]
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Re: Leading me
(User Rating: 1 )
by VampiricSuccubus on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 01:12:28 AM AEST
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| been there felt it... great that you poured it out though... and it excelent form... great poem |
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Re: Leading me
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by TheSpiritx on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 12:05:18 AM AEST
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| This is most definitely short and direct. You do not fail, regardless of the limit in length, to explain how the love you thought you had so quickly turned on you. Your poem is a shocking, but true piece of work. Good write. |
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Re: Leading me
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:57:23 PM AEST
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| You got through your feelings, that is good, now you can move on |
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