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This is The End of Me
Contributed by
norm
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Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 06:45:00 AM in AEST
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There comes a time when I must be
a sponge requesting sympathy,
My life has turned from pink to black
And all I feel is thorough lack.
Lack of all that makes life grand,
Love and recognition and
The will to thrive, the will to give
In fact the very will to live.
It happened there at Lake Tahoe
Whereat my love told me to go,
There is no other girl for me,
Now our love can never be.
Why live on, my life should close,
I can't recover as she goes,
Love's sweet thrill is gone for e'er,
And so I end my love affair.
I wish to join the 'Ender's Club'
I can't recover from this snub,
Why should I live on... for what?
It's time for me to end my lot...
Copyright ©
norm
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2003-09-02 06:45:00]
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Re: This is The End of Me
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by PoloRM on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 07:21:52 AM AEST
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As long as you are breathing
And people you are pleasing
It's not the end, no it's not
So don't end it on the spot.
Sympathy you have, I am one
Both of us can have lots of fun
Come on in we'll drink some beers
We'll share some laughs and share some tears.
And you'll see more will join
No need to bribe them with a coin
Nope it's not it's not the end
And be sure you've got a friend. |
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Re: This is The End of Me
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 08:56:29 AM AEST
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Oh Norm
this is so not like you
to be feeling so sad and blue
you the guy to always cheer us up
Feel free to pm me and Ill tell u a joke
put a happy smile back on your sweet face friend!
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Re: This is The End of Me
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by faffeee on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:18:17 AM AEST
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| this was a great write, the rigid rhyme scheme seems to reflect the way you feel trapped and stuck in your unhappiness..i hope things get better for you, keep on writing, 'the end' will soon clear and you'll see another reason for living. xxx |
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Re: This is The End of Me
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 11:52:48 AM AEST
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The loss of a love is not worth the strife
Forget that one and begin new life
For any who does not see the worth of you
Should just be dumped in a pile of poo poo
Of course as we all know the only girl
For you is your long time true love shirl
So happy you will always be with your pearl
And be giving life the wonderful whirl
Shari |
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Re: This is The End of Me
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 04:41:34 PM AEST
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i`ve never seen you write like this norm,
i`m hopeing its a reflection. good write Crow |
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Re: This is The End of Me
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 05:04:33 PM AEST
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My dear friend Norm
If you were having an affair...no sympathy from me you'll render...
You've been a very bad boy, and I'm glad she will end 'er!
Poor Shirl sits at home all alone, while you're out there acting like your heir!
I hope this will teach you a fine lesson or two.
And I hope that Shirl will have an affair too!
That will really teach you, little boy blue.
That what's good for the Gander is good for the Goose too!
You should be ashamed of yourself.
Connie Sue
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Re: This is The End of Me
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 08:37:18 PM AEST
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This was a good there comes a time for sadness and a time for happiness I can relate to that. Hopefully u can be happy once again. Keep on writin like this if it helps.
Bobo (Joel) |
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