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My Nights
Contributed by
reason
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Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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White white shirt,
Dark brown eyes
Is all that I see
In my dark nights.
Dark and deep like my heart,
Like a secret that I hide.
When its late
And cold outside,
I ask the stars
Why your smile
Tears my heart apart
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reason
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2003-09-02 08:45:00]
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Re: My Nights
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by faffeee on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:21:42 AM AEST
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| short, sweet and simple..i think you expressed everything that needed to be said in these few simple lines, i loved it! xxx |
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Re: My Nights
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 01:04:43 PM AEST
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| the first line grabs you.....it's like you grabbed me by the shoulders...told me what you neede to say....left me reeling....and sad |
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Re: My Nights
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by painted_echos on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 09:54:18 PM AEST
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| sadly beautiful...tears. |
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