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i hope one day
Contributed by
wil_ca
on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i hope one day it hurts
i hope one day you cry
i hope one day you realize
i hope one day it tears you up inside
i hope one day it finally hits you
your still alone
and its no one's fault but your own
i hope one day your heart wont let you forget
i hope one day, you think of me
i hope one day, you really truly regret
but i wont wait
for you to realize
ive already spent too many days
and too may nights
so when you awake from your dream
and your calling out for me
dont look my way
cuz i was gone that first day
when you turned your back on me
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wil_ca
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2003-09-02 18:05:00]
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Re: i hope one day
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by painted_echos on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 09:13:51 PM AEST
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| ouch...but i liked it. well put. |
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Re: i hope one day
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:57:36 PM AEST
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Well written..sad but with a just the right amount of hope...
Jenni |
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Re: i hope one day
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by TeenageEmoGirl on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 09:16:22 PM AEST
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| i can most definitely identify with ya.... nicely put and nice rhyme scheme! good job! |
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