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Something Strange
Contributed by
The_Poet
on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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"Woke up to the sound of pouring rain
The wind would whisper and I'd think of you
I paint a picture of the days gone by
I gave you my share of hard times
But that's the price you paid
And through it all cudnt kept the promise that we cud made
I'd wanna hear you say - I remember you
What was it you once said, was just a big mistake
That there would be things in life that couldn't be
Sneaking in the city
Lookin' for a fight
Good God, bless my soul
Caught a lonely day
Crying on a cigarette
I got nasty, nasty habits
And that's all I gonna get
You got me forced to crack my lids in two
I'm still stuck inside the rubber room
I gotta punch the clock that leads the blind
I'm just another gear in the assembly line-oh no
The noose gets tighter around my throat
But I ain't at the end of my rope
A routine injection, a lethal dose
But my day in the sun ain't even close
There's no need to waste your prayers on me
You better mark my words 'cause I'm history.
Yes indeed..!!! "
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The_Poet
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2003-09-02 22:05:00]
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Re: Something Strange
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by VampiricSuccubus on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:35:14 PM AEST
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interresting poem, but the one cud like I couldn't understand and i'm the mistress of typos :) nice job though
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Re: Something Strange
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:59:00 PM AEST
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I absolutely love the first couple lines. Great job.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Something Strange
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 06:04:36 AM AEST
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| very interesting.. venkat |
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Re: Something Strange
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 10:54:14 AM AEST
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| Nice write. Ivy |
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Re: Something Strange
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:45:39 PM AEST
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| Very well written & fun to read - Damien |
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