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Coma
Contributed by
adsalamon
on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Wake me from this coma
Rouse me from this nightmare
Free me from this prison cell
The pain bearing down on me
Mental, physical, torture screams
Reverberate clearly round my skull
I cant see, the lights too dark
The day, the night; all the same
Mouth so dry, I wanna scream
I wanna run, discard my shell
A caged bird, yet no chirp
Plumage long gone, colour invisible
Everywhere I step feel death row
Walk down the dark roads
Cracks in every pavement slab
I can never seem to take the right step
The journey started already downhill
Where can I get of this ride?
Copyright ©
adsalamon
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2003-09-03 06:35:00]
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Re: Coma
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 07:35:37 PM AEST
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Wow this was awesome u don't know how much I can relate to it. Wow i loved the brutal imagery in this. This was so friggin amazing wow I can't say enough.
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