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Timepiece
Contributed by
POOBEAR
on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Once, the hands of the clock
seemed to gently caress my face.
Reinforcing the reassurance.
My tears not yet mature enough,
nor bitter enough, to taint my heart.
I thought I was able enough to
manage my time without
having to constantly keep
an eye on it.
But I faltered, and every moment
seemed to gain in momentum.
I could not keep them from passing.
It seemed as if every part of the mechanism
was working together to work against me.
The sound of the second hand ticking,
distracting me,
as it swiftly swept any last
chances away.
My peace of mind,
little by little,
disappearing somewhere within
that once treasured timepiece.
Copyright ©
POOBEAR
... [
2003-09-03 15:35:00]
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Re: Timepiece
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by wolfflow on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:41:45 PM AEST
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very well crafted, perfect in the way it progreses,
paul |
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Re: Timepiece
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 12:00:50 PM AEST
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| my peace of mind....really great piece!!!! |
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