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EROTIC LOVER (Acrostic)
Contributed by
Del
on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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E very time we meet
R omance is oh, so sweet.
O nly you can make me feel
T hat the love we share is real.
I want to prove my love for you
C ause I know you want me too.
L et me first kiss you tenderly
O ver and over, then lovingly.
V ery softly, I'll tell you,
E verthing I would like you to do.
R omantic love just can't be beat,
S haring it with you is a real treat.
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Del
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2003-09-04 20:35:00]
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Re: EROTIC LOVER (Acrostic)
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by Saira on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 09:48:46 AM AEST
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So lovely!! Good style.
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Re: EROTIC LOVER (Acrostic)
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by krismisevski on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 10:47:44 AM AEST
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"L et me first kiss you tenderly
O ver and over, then lovingly"
These lines here are nice. But PLEASE change lines R & S. Romance can't be beat, you are a real treat??? It doesn't scream romance. |
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Re: EROTIC LOVER (Acrostic)
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2011 @ 09:14:16 AM AEST
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| Cause I know you want me to? |
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