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This Isn't Our Last Goodbye
Contributed by
Rage
on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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~*~
I saw your contained tears,
And I saw your forced smile.
Your visage made my heart ache,
And made me feel so vile.
I was there with you from the beginning,
When your fingers wrapped around mine.
I was there with you when hell began,
You were a baby, and I was only nine.
I watched you grow into childhood,
And thats where Im leaving you.
Im sorry that I cannot stay,
But my love for you will always be true.
I love you with every drop of my tears,
And I miss your scent every day.
I love you with all my bleeding heart,
But you and I both know I just cant stay.
Babes, you are my sunshine,
You brightened up my Hell.
I know its going to hurt for a while,
But I know you shall be well.
I cant stay locked up anymore,
I need room to breathe.
And with all my hugs and kisses,
Im going to have to leave.
Daddy doesnt love me anymore,
And I still dont know why.
We had so many years together,
And the thoughts are only making me cry.
Please water my bamboo plants,
And keep them healthy for me.
And when it hurts and you miss me so,
Hug the teddy bear so you wont be so lonely.
Ill hug mine as I think of you,
Hoping you feel the embrace.
And remember my kisses upon your cheek,
When the tears are sliding down your face.
Remember that my love for you is undying,
So please dont be so sad and please dont cry.
Baby Boy, we will be together again,
I promise, this isnt our last goodbye.
~*~
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Rage
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2003-09-06 01:35:00]
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Re: This Isn't Our Last Goodbye
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by kalika_vidya on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 03:11:53 AM AEST
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| Great poem .really heart touching..just my eyes are filled with tears...K |
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Re: This Isn't Our Last Goodbye
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by venkat on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 04:06:54 AM AEST
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| What a lovely poem, Rage, this is very nicely written..really heart touching. thanks for sharing your tender feelings...venkat |
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Re: This Isn't Our Last Goodbye
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by Pompous on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 06:25:09 AM AEST
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| thats an amazing and beautiful poem, I lover every word of it. |
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Re: This Isn't Our Last Goodbye
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by Clown_Prince on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 12:09:54 PM AEST
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| Awww. Wow, this poem kinda... got to me. Very well done, Gracie. I'd like to leave a long comment, but... I'm kinda speechless. I think this is probably the best poem of yours I've ever read. At least it seems that way to me. Wow, though. |
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