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Hero
Contributed by
comod
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Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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To my destiny i ride , knowing pain will be on my side , leaving my kingdome leaving my name so my poeple will chant it when i die .
into the wilderness i enter
no enemies at sight
my sword on the left
god on my right
oh for a second i lost my guard
and here they come for every side
i pulled out my weapon
and fighted with pride
one by one i shattered their blood
but sudden coldness i felt within followed by a pain and all i heard was my people chanting my name !
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2003-09-06 12:35:00]
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Re: Hero
(User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 04:36:52 PM AEST
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It's great. I liked it. Well done!
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Re: Hero
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by Kimmie_mac on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 04:42:33 PM AEST
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Well done but so sad.
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