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Broken Mind
Contributed by
adsalamon
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Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
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You lambaste me
I fall apart
Broke open shell
Im torn apart
Why couldnt you tell the truth?
Right from the very start
Youre never there
I hurt inside
Slice open soul
I burn inside
Why did I have to be who I am?
Right from the very start
Its no surprise
Im the one that you despise
And its no surprise
I just cant take your lies
Cant you see you agonise
Every part of me
You torment me
I lose again
Fade to nothing
I kill myself
Loneliness always partners me
Right from the very start
Its no surprise
Im the one you despise
And its no surprise
I just cant take your lies
Cant you see you agonise?
Every part of me
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adsalamon
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2003-09-07 02:05:00]
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Re: Broken Mind
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by Saira on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 02:42:30 PM AEST
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I truly liked it. Good one!
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Re: Broken Mind
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:24:18 PM AEST
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Very enjoyable read. Great job.
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Re: Broken Mind
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:38:32 PM AEST
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as always well written with a tinge of sadness. I liked the bitterness in this. Good job.
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