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More Than You Ever Were
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Your black lips
Continue emitting black lies
Will you never
See me for who I really am and
Scream scream
Scream scream
Until you lose your breath
Until its meaningless
Until lifes worthless
Pointless; senseless
And Despairs arms around me
Are soothing, calming
Shes more than you ever were
Shes my true love, my soulmate
And you will never understand
How my false smiles crack my lips
How I feel the need
To despise my own greed
And I cannot revive my life
And I cannot relive my life
And I cannot sieve my faults
I am already dead
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afraid_of_fear
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2003-09-07 06:05:00]
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Re: More Than You Ever Were
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by Kimmie_mac on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 06:06:32 AM AEST
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| Deep and all consuming. Good write. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: More Than You Ever Were
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 10:44:44 AM AEST
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well that was an interesting moment,
paul |
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Re: More Than You Ever Were
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:52:23 PM AEST
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I loved the repetition in this. I hope your doing good and if its not you know you can talk to me. Keep on writing out your thoughts.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: More Than You Ever Were
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:27:45 PM AEST
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Ahhhh how you grieve,when all at once you'll find relief...and wonder what hit you! Your words are a touching form of embracing pain!
I love your work!!! Great job!!!
Angel always...love ya girlfriend.....
joni 0:-) |
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Re: More Than You Ever Were
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:31:43 AM AEST
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| I liked this poem a lot. Good writing. |
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