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I'll know this is Real!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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I wish there was a way I could talk to you,
Tell you what I'm feeling today,
all the things I'm going through,
but cant find the words to say,
If only I could see you here,
I'd tell you what I feel,
so much I want your touches near,
so I know that you are real,
9 months seem just to long,
to wait to see your face,
but Mommy is going to be strong,
and take the waiting with grace,
I wish I could tell you all thats inside,
For my heart is aching now,
I'm taking this pregnancy with stride,
One day I'll tell you some how,
I do love you,even though your not here,
That I know you feel,
for when I see your face,so clear,
Then I'll know its real!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-09-08 14:25:00]
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Re: I'll know this is Real!
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 04:00:25 PM AEST
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Very sweet. I remember these feelings way back when.
God luck and God bless,
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Re: I'll know this is Real!
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 06:11:42 PM AEST
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you CAN talk to your baby... and he or she probably knows how you feel already!! :)
Good write.
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Re: I'll know this is Real!
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 06:55:48 PM AEST
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Very sweet, Lowman, I just love your poetry, did you miss me, I know I missed you and all of YPDC. Great write.
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Re: I'll know this is Real!
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by Crow on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 09:23:33 PM AEST
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| this is a beautiful write! my very best wishes to you, Crow |
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Re: I'll know this is Real!
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 10:53:59 PM AEST
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very lovely
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Re: I'll know this is Real!
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by VampiricSuccubus on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 11:35:52 PM AEST
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| i love this poem, i wrote something similar for my friend's unborn child. i wish you luck on your baby, may both of you live blessed lives |
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Re: I'll know this is Real!
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 08:09:47 PM AEST
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| The baby hears you maam- In its heart and soul- lovely write !--Russ |
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Re: I'll know this is Real!
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:20:47 PM AEST
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| Touching write Christina ... best wishes to you and your baby ... Jan |
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Re: I'll know this is Real!
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 03:49:47 AM AEST
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| How nice you are to write such a sweet poem.. God bless you..Christina. venkat |
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