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Voice
Contributed by
Aika
on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Talk to me and in your voice I hear A thousand church bells ringing My heart leaps for joy and I smile It fullfills me with happiness and love Tell me whatever you wish Cos I know you cherish Does not matter for how long you talk Cos in my mind, forever you sound Does not matter what language you speak Cos my heart always knows what you mean Speak loudly or whisper in my ear I can assure you, that I always hear Does not even matter you are far Cos you are forever in my heart
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-09-08 21:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Voice
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mike_Nothing on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 10:58:55 PM AEST (User
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meh...it doesn't a flow. Or at least i don't think so. |
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Re: Voice
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mike_Nothing on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 10:59:08 PM AEST (User
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meh...it doesn't have a flow. Or at least i don't think so. |
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Re: Voice
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:59:35 AM AEST (User
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I know you well Aika, one thing I know about you is that you think with your heart and soul.
This poem proves that you do. I loved reading it because it was so YOU!
Even sounds can be beautiful to Aika.
What a wonderful perspective you have surrounded yourself with love and joy!
Love, Connie
And I love your poetry! |
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Re: Voice
(User Rating: 1 ) by Val-Hundra on
Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 03:48:26 AM AEST (User
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This is cute. True friendship is a wonderful thing.
By the way, simply out of curiosity... did you perhaps mean "fills" instead of "Fullfills" in line four? |
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