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Posing
Contributed by
twinky
on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A smile upside down
is called a frown
but posing as a clown
doesnt work with a frown
so i laugh and i smile
and i joke and i play
i make others believe
im having a great day
but inside im frowning
im crying you see
outside ive "healed"
but inside i bleed
i dont talk about it
i dont even try
i dont want people to watch
while i sit and i cry
i cry when im alone
locked in my room
so i dont bring others down
to my level of gloom
i know i dont want to die
everyone who really knows me would agree
so for today i live
as for tomorrow... we'll see
Copyright ©
twinky
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2003-09-09 03:35:00]
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Re: Posing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 05:00:49 AM AEST
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| Twinky, this is such a beautiful poem. I really touch in a place noone that know me never sees. For most of my life I lived behind a veil of make-up consisting of fake smiles and false eyes showing happiness. Worried of bringing down my friends and family members level of joy, so i hide behind this character day after day. I became very good at this act that someone my two selves I could never tell apart, and all at once two become one. At times even now I can't tell who I am. Never hide behind your veil to long, because even within yourself you can lose who you are atalented and beautiful poet. Awesome poem and sorry fo babbling. |
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Re: Posing
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:37:24 PM AEST
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This was really good and I can totally relate to what you describe in this poem.
outside ive "healed"
but inside i bleed
I loved those two lines. Keep yer chin up.
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Re: Posing
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 07:44:00 PM AEST
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Twinky - I love your style and this is a great poem - full of real feelings - but like Goose - said don't hide your real feelings.
You have a right to feel them and if that bothers other people that's their problem not yours
un beso
merry |
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Re: Posing
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by faffeee on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:55:21 PM AEST
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| great write, i saw myself in it as soon as i started reading. its sad so many people are hiding, but it just feels like thats the only solution. xx |
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