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Nobody but u
Contributed by
philly
on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A grey sky. A gentle rain
After this nothing will be the same
I shall never gaze upon her beauty again
All is lost... this is the end
I draw her near for our last embrace
I miss her already.. a world without her i cannot face
Tears Tears endless Tears
I cry out but no one hears
My sorrow is a thousand seas
My despair... only she can ease
She releases me from her grasp
turns away and walks past
I can only remain still
Without her i have no will
The clouds pass.. and the night is revealed
She is gone.. my fate is sealed
i wished the truth was not true
I wished i could love another but i can only love you
i hoped in what was hopeless
It wouldn't last i should have known this
I will miss your love
which was purer then the whitest dove
I will miss your lips
I'll remember letting you go.. That last touch of our fingertips
I'll wonder where you are
Somewhere beyond the horizon below the stars
And when i look into the sky
almost as beautfiul as you but not quite
I'll keep hoping that you'll come back to me
So that i might keep you for eternity.
Copyright ©
philly
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2003-09-09 05:05:00]
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Re: Nobody but u
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by Pompous on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:16:22 AM AEST
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| I loved it. every single bit. well done that was amazing |
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Re: Nobody but u
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:57:39 AM AEST
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| super write, you have me feeling blue. very good expression. Crow |
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Re: Nobody but u
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:40:58 PM AEST
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A grey sky. A gentle rain
After this nothing will be the same.....
the first 2 lines of an exceptional write that has me reflecting on a time just recently past....
with thanks
rosie
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Re: Nobody but u
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 04:30:31 PM AEST
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| this is absolutely beautiful... |
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Re: Nobody but u
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 07:13:21 PM AEST
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this was a gem left me with a tear in my eye.
i wished the truth was not true
I wished i could love another but i can only love you
i hoped in what was hopeless
Those 3 lines were so great.
Bobo (Joel) |
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