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night by the fire light
Contributed by
frozensuicide
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Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I watched as the daylight crawls,
Past the shadows hanging on the walls,
The sun did set like a dropping ball,
So slow yet so fast as I recall.
Night struck like a shattering of a mirror,
So horrendous in the nights sky, stalking of deer.
The fire cackled with the ray of red like mars,
The smoke engaging in an uproar towards the stars.
A marshmallow aroma as strong as to much cologne,
Enveloped my lungs with the sweet taste of its unknown.
Burning from the embers of the fires rebirth,
Melted and falling to the grass and earth.
Mt family gathered in a circle like a tribe,
Giving off this persevering vibe.
Roasting marshmallows together as a family,
All laughing and talking happily.
Every year, this is something we do,
On a cold summer night in June, July, and August too,
This is my past childhood memory,
Of something I always want to be apart of me.
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Re: night by the fire light
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 03:12:09 PM AEST
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| GUD WRITE. IVY&DAMIEN |
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Re: night by the fire light
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 05:55:07 PM AEST
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I liked this very well written created lots of awesome imagery in my head. You should write more stuff like that.
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