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martyrdumb
Contributed by
Cancer
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Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
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to what sanctuary will you flee when i ride into town and where the hell will your heaven go when i burn the ***** down no more hollow redemption to quell your growing guilt no more lord of flies to justify the house of lies you've built bereft of petty salvation you suffer in the shame of your sins all hope is lost, you become fodder for the cross and your martyrdom truly begins no helping hand to save you now no divine intervention you hang upon the tree, like the one you want to be suffer at the hands of your own invention
centuries of hollow promises a lifetime of fear-smeared lies you love everyone, but when i don't submit you are so quick to crucify hounded by your rabid dogma beaten bloody by the book of love i stand tall, against your thoughtless assault and i'm not the only one
let me ask you something who is the real martyr here the widespread herd mindlessly following a dead god or the solitary fiend who stands in defiance of the death-obsessed cult of the masses
don't whine of the persecution you face or how hard it is to be a christian i live in the buckle of the bible belt my life has been threatened by the "holy ones" a bible in my face, and a gun to my head as you spout hollow scriptures of peace still, i defy, your god denied pull the trigger, you'll get an early release no born again satanist ever got an early parole but, murderers who find jesus are released at the cost of their soul
browbeaten for my hatred of religion but you hate each other too waging war on unholy whores who worship a different god than you you are just as full of hate as me just too scared to let it show i guess if you feel true human emotion it's off to hell you go
so go ahead, and hide inside and get used to that plastic smile it's suffocating you, making you choke on your own ungodly bile but, if you're fake for long enough you'll die and wake in paradise i hope it's everything you dreamed of YOU ***** PARASITE
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Cancer
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Re: martyrdumb
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:06:56 PM AEST (User
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I must admit Roy this was really good however I can't understand why u hate Christians so much. Sure some Christians are like what u described but they are few. Once again a great poem and I loved your comparisons.
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Re: martyrdumb
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cancer on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:22:03 PM AEST (User
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joel, i hate them because the ones i described in this write are the ones i'm surrounded by. i really do live in the buckle of the bible belt. and these single-minded hypocrites combine to form the screaming, bleeding walls of my hell. i have actually had my life threatened, and the life of my family, because, at one point, i was a very outspoken satanist. i'm aware that not all christians are assholes. my grandfather is a baptist minister and he's one of the coolest people i know. but, 95% of the ones i'm around, deserve nothing short of the most slow and painful deaths that my distorted mind can invoke.
thanks for the comments.
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Re: martyrdumb
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:28:11 PM AEST (User
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I LOVE THIS!!!!! you have spoken....having grown up there....hypocrisy soaked hatred...everything they say or do is in honor of their god....not true love.....they should be afraid....very afraid....i rue the day they all come to this realization......
awesome piece....it rocks!!!! |
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Re: martyrdumb
(User Rating: 1 ) by Merry on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 07:50:05 PM AEST (User
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Bravo - this is an incredible write - enjoyed every word of it. I live in an area infested with born - agian Christians - my duaghter married one - since divorced - in his quiet mealy mouth way he hated everyone that wasn't like him - so much for poor god - and brotherly love and all that crap - I am afraid of these people - and they seem to be garnering polictical power - what a terifying thought - keep ranting and raving - we need you
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Re: martyrdumb
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 10:59:39 PM AEST (User
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| Awesome piece of poetry, as always ... you're never afraid to speak your mind and say exactly what is true ... Superb write ... Jan |
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