|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Elusive Lines Of Poetry
Contributed by
Bizzy
on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
|
From dreams,
they wakened me,...
lovely one-lined thoughts in poetry...
and truths, profound,
heard only flittingly.
I tried to grasp them in my mind,
but impossibly.
In the hope of something
I could understand,
I hoped to see
and let the words expand.
Clearly,
they were here,
but briefly;
now, totally,
they are gone again.
I sensed their essence was Divine;
glorious scenes of nature, earthly,
and Heaven.
Could they have lingered a little while,
I'd have caught them within my pen
and on holy paper,
flowed them out again,
each elusive,
wise and lovely...
sacred line.
by Gloria Faye Reida Coykendall
written September 9, 2003
Copyright ©
Bizzy
... [
2003-09-10 00:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Elusive Lines Of Poetry
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:36:37 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this is beautiful...you've caught much with your pen. painted_echos |
|
|
Re: Elusive Lines Of Poetry
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 02:51:05 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Oh my yes, Buzzy dear.
That's when most of the thoughts I write down come to me loud and clear!
Early morn after a good nights rest!
Pen and legal pad always my best!
Fleeting moments are gone in one second....like listening to a cricket strum just once....then it is gone!
Oh how I loved this poem. The Essence of poetry....that special sacred feeling that only we feel, almost steal from those precious moments that aren't really real!
Wonderful poem, Buzzy, Just Wonderful....
You too are so real!
Lovingcritters
Connie Sue |
|
|
Re: Elusive Lines Of Poetry
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 02:51:34 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Oh my yes, Buzzy dear.
That's when most of the thoughts I write down come to me loud and clear!
Early morn after a good nights rest!
Pen and legal pad always my best!
Fleeting moments are gone in one second....like listening to a cricket strum just once....then it is gone!
Oh how I loved this poem. The Essence of poetry....that special sacred feeling that only we feel, almost steal from those precious moments that aren't really real!
Wonderful poem, Buzzy, Just Wonderful....
You too are so real!
Lovingcritters
Connie Sue |
|
|
Re: Elusive Lines Of Poetry
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 08:46:36 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
good to see one of your writes...very beautiful
Shari |
|
|
Re: Elusive Lines Of Poetry
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 06:57:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Excellent write maam. Certainly understand your subject. Quickly inspiration comes and even quicker it goes. Very well written--Russ |
|
|
Re: Elusive Lines Of Poetry
(User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 05:00:08 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Bizzy, how true the words that wake the night, this is just delightful, take care, Val |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
