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What you did to my heart
Contributed by
Kimmie_mac
on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You took it, you shook it,
you stroked it, you broke it,
Thats what you did to my heart
You really tore it apart.
You strung it you wrung it,
You wowed it, you stole it.
Thats what you did to my heart
You really tore it apart.
You trapped it, you sapped it,
You twisted it, You whipped it,
Thats what you did to my heart,
You really tore it apart.
You hung it, you flung it,
You tripped it, you stripped it,
Thats what you did to my heart,
you really tore it apart,
Its in bits and pieces now,
to put it back together I dont know how.
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Kimmie_mac
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2003-09-10 11:35:00]
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Re: What you did to my heart
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:11:20 PM AEST
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well said I have been there
shari |
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Re: What you did to my heart
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 06:30:45 PM AEST
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| all of these words work I think. good write Crow |
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Re: What you did to my heart
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 11:31:41 PM AEST
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Well done on this poem it all works for me!
Good write! Christina |
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Re: What you did to my heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 12:27:35 AM AEST
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| ooh, i do so relate...well put, wouldn't change a word. hmm, do you ever wonder that several of us here are writing about the same jerk!! painted_echos |
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Re: What you did to my heart
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by venkat on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 01:54:35 AM AEST
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| Sad but it is well done..words are like arrows shot very fast... good job. venkat |
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