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Risk
Contributed by
crow
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Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There is a risk we take
when our hearts open.
Feelings find a home there.
For me a burning,
for those I cannot rescue or protect.
Revenge is not mine, but thought
a cool water for burning, a necessity
for bitter valor.
No vision to cover malice,
no grace to ease intent
in my heart and hands.
I wish for God`s power for one moment,
and shudder at the thought of having it.
Protect all childern at all costs....... Crow
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2003-09-10 18:05:00]
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Re: Risk
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 07:18:35 PM AEST
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| and this world we live in is better, because people like you dare to open their heart. as always crow, your words are poignant; you are gifted......painted_echos |
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Re: Risk
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 07:51:21 PM AEST
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| So very true. It's sad that we protect ourselves in this way, so that we don't get hurt. |
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Re: Risk
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 09:40:56 PM AEST
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well said my friend,
Shari |
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Re: Risk
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 10:30:40 PM AEST
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This is so very touching....very well written..
Jenni |
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Re: Risk
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by Kimmie_mac on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 02:14:03 AM AEST
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This is so true Crow. Great Poem. Children.....The one thing that should be a blessing instead of a burden. Love them, lead them, teach them for they are the future.Sorry I just love kids, ALL kids.
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Re: Risk
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 10:28:39 AM AEST
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| Well said on this poem,They are the reason for living,Gods way of saying the world must go on! Christina |
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Re: Risk
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by jaeann on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 01:42:06 PM AEST
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| beautiful............. |
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