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lovely rose
Contributed by
maha_ak49
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Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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love,
is an unopened rose bud,
you cannot force it,
to bloom,
only by time and care,
it will bloom,
when it is a rose,
water it well,
don't let it fade,
when red turns black,
lovely rose,
is no more
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Re: lovely rose
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 12:57:41 PM AEST
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lovely write
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Re: lovely rose
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 04:17:49 PM AEST
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Great comparison between love and roses. I think you hit the nail on the head!
Love Joy and Peace,
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