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About to break loose
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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About to break loose
One string still ties me to life
And I cant choose
The space is calling my soul
I wont fight to keep my life
There is nothing here to loose
My eyes suffocated the blackness of my heart
I m drowning into an ocean
In which lays my doom
Waves washing my emotions
And cleaning my wounds
No one shall feel or suffer
While laying in a tomb
I dig peace
Its not in vain
To loose a life
Where hate run in veins
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cant-skate
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2003-09-11 09:35:00]
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Re: About to break loose
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by EmSal on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 01:53:08 AM AEST
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So sad, but if even one string holds you to life isn't that telling you something???
Good write though.
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