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The sky
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Look above
Creation Is to be
Such a beauty
Millions of worlds u can see
Beneath we live
Above we seek
Just a dream for us
To see
Deep as a million ocean
Stars and planets in endless motion
Drown me, swallow me
Sky, and fill me with pure emotions
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2003-09-11 11:05:00]
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Re: The sky
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 03:37:22 PM AEST
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Amazing poem! I really love how you used just as many words as you needed- not too many, not too little. A happy medium. Every word is worth it!
Love Joy and Peace,
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