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Escape
Contributed by
delerioustearz
on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Everytime I try to escape
Something stuns my mind
try to get away once again
I fall down and I cry
Listening to some music
trying to get all of it out
like an endless nightmare
where there are unheard screams and shouts
No matter how something is silent
Its not silent enough
No matter how easy I get it
Things still seem so tough
My bag is in the corner
As I begin to leave
My heartbeat echoes in the room
As blood runs down my sleeve.
Copyright ©
delerioustearz
... [
2003-09-11 16:05:00]
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Re: Escape
(User Rating: 1 )
by StAiN on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 11:20:03 PM AEST
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smooth and deep. i like the peom.
suicide is weak though.
get your revenge on the world in a useful way.
stay strong.
live and learn.
never love too far |
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Re: Escape
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 03:57:25 PM AEST
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This was very good and very well written. I loved the last 4 lines the captured the ending beautifully.
Bobo (Joel) |
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