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sometimes i'll just be sitting here
Contributed by
painted_echos
on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
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you know sometimes ill just be sitting here,
listening to some tunes, old ones that used to
make me feel good,
then sad,
now, a little mad
but im not so mad.
just
feeling two ways at once.
want so much
yet to let go
damn, not easy to do.
so sometimes ill just be sitting here,
listening to some tunes, old ones that bring me
in and down,
soul side,
see, i close my eyes
and let the music enter me.
just
feeling two ways at once.
hearing all
hearing none
its only lines in time.
and sometimes ill just be chillin here,
listening to some tunes, maybe have a beer
life still goes on,
though its
different than it was
you happened by and took my heart.
just
feeling two ways at once.
so tired
i can't sleep
oh, the beer thing is new.
and sometimes ill just be dancing here,
listening to some tunes, body keeping time
typing to the
music,
wide open i am
i let the words come down through me.
just
feeling two ways at once
drawn to you
pushed from you
between, the words come down.
now
turn it up baby, time to join my dance.
and we all know what that means,
ive had another beer.
so
the count may change, but then
thats the mood.
still in time though,
watcha think.
turn it up baby, kinda want to play.
without any of the rules,
those i know i ignore.
so
only what i feel, dear
mixed with beer.
maybe a toke,
and a smoke.
turn it up baby, youll know the old song.
those sailing shoes and julia, were
sneaking down the alley
so
i wrote in their rhythm
just to you.
follow the beat,
now feel it.
turn it up baby, ill have one more beer.
no doubt im talking to a page
youre no doubt sure to read
so
no surprise i love you
you love me.
but dont much want
to, do you.
and
so just now im sorta sitting here,
typing to the tune, wishing you were near
old count same time, and
hey julia,
does it bother you
no maybe not, ive been off before.
just
feeling two ways at once.
come to me
run from me
shit, dont know what to do.
for a while, ive just been thinking here,
will you let me near enough to love you
is it me you cannot
trust, or
do you shut me out
trying hard to keep you from me from you.
just
feeling two ways at once.
you in me
me in you
and, i do love you.
why wont you take me into your dark?
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Re: sometimes i'll just be sitting here
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by hazelnut on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 12:00:43 AM AEST
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| *Hums*music makes the best of me |
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Re: sometimes i'll just be sitting here
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 02:03:40 AM AEST
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| Great write. I love just chilling out to some old tunes and writing and work on some poems all the time. Awesome poem. |
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Re: sometimes i'll just be sitting here
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 04:36:57 AM AEST
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for some music plays a strong part of their lives.. good work
Shari |
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Re: sometimes i'll just be sitting here
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by Daydreamer on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 01:54:59 PM AEST
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| I like this poem...I hope julia can learn to trust you and let you in. hugs Daydreamer |
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Re: sometimes i'll just be sitting here
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by painted_echos on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:11:43 PM AEST
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hi daydreamer,
and thank you for the compliment. though i guess i wasn't clear with the julia part! i am female, 'sailing shoes', 'hey julia', and 'sneaking sally thru the alley' is a trilogy of songs sung by robert palmer in the 70's. guess that dates me, huh!!! i'm 44, btw. painted_echos |
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