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Rails
Contributed by
ramfire
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Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I walked the rails out of my town this day and saw many things.
Train tracks are different marking a way that is often rank.
Weeds are here seen to conceal trash and rubbish a wild wind brings.
Building has bare back to rails with its loading dock being blank,
old sad car stored in yard having house owned and kept by a crank.
Street fronts are different, laid out for automobiles and such.
See there's an empty glass bottle unbroken some person drank.
Rail's path is lonesome trek; I doubt if I love it very much.
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ramfire
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2003-09-12 10:35:00]
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Re: Rails
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 04:08:35 PM AEST
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Once again, ramfire, a great poem. I really enjoyed the comparison of life to a railroad track..... lonely and baren..... awesome job.
post me about new stuff, OK?
Love Joy and Peace,
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Re: Rails
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by Merry on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 04:09:16 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem describing the railroad tracks - I took the train to Atlanta a couple years ago - and I saw the seamy side of American life - no HGTV housing where I went - it was a very sad sight -
really enjoyed reading this poem
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