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To The Spirit of Death....
Contributed by
Sonibe
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Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
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Death, you picked a
fine time to mess with me....
I felt your dagger pierce
through my hard-shelled heart....
Your dagger, that burns internally,
slowly slashes up my throat....
You tried to kill me
by suffication and nearly succeeded....
I just want to tell you
that I'm not ready to go yet....
I know that usually
I would have no say in this....
But I may have just found
my reason to live on....
I have many missions to complete
before I leave this world....
(My mind went blank and I passed out before I could finish this)
Copyright ©
Sonibe
... [
2003-09-12 14:35:00]
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Re: To The Spirit of Death....
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 03:31:46 PM AEST
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Sonibe,
Deep stuff..... it was a powerful peice to read- you expressed it well. Great work!
Love Joy and Peace,
Jellybellyprincess |
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Re: To The Spirit of Death....
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 07:09:42 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Death is seemingly always one step behind us. Take care of yourself. Peace be with you. Great poem! |
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Re: To The Spirit of Death....
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by hazelnut on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 11:57:50 PM AEST
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| stay strong, fight! |
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Re: To The Spirit of Death....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:39:14 PM AEST
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| It seems Death has passed both our ways many times in these short lives....you never know when she's around for her final visit........not anytime soon i hope |
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