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Surrender
Contributed by
hazelnut
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Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As I lay under the oppressive covers
A shiver snaked through my body
As the frigid fingers of fear wrapped themselves around my thumping heart
Was I ready?
The beckon of eternal slumber was inviting
The tempt of the smothering embrace of death
Then melting into the shadows
When a life is taken in an unrepayable theft
My eyelids are getting heavier
I set myself adrift, wandering
Into the realm of misguided souls
There was no use resisting
At long last, I surrender
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hazelnut
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2003-09-12 18:35:00]
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Re: Surrender
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by emystar on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 08:06:54 PM AEST
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I hear ya. wonder if anyone is actually ever ready.
Take care and don't succomb.
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: Surrender
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 11:40:22 PM AEST
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| Groovy. |
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Re: Surrender
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 04:37:11 AM AEST
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That was really really sad, and people do surrender, and they can't come back, the people they leave behind miss them, hate them and blame themselves at the same time. Awesome write, as it captured my heart.
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