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Empty...Hate
Contributed by
EmSal
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Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm empty but I hate you.
Nothing I heard from you was true.
You left my soul black and blue.
At first it was right, I had no clue,
What the hell I got myself into.
After that my hatred grew,
My happiness I could not pursue,
So to myself I withdrew.
I didn't let anyone know what I went through,
And now out of my hands there's no more us two.
I'm still empty but I hate you.
Copyright ©
EmSal
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2003-09-13 21:05:00]
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Re: Empty...Hate
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 12:28:08 PM AEST
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Hey! Congratulations! Every last word of every line seems to rhyme throughout the poem!
Anyway, good poem. Keep on writing pal. |
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Re: Empty...Hate
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:51:11 PM AEST
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this is pretty viscious, but i like it, and hope you got your anger out through writing it.
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Empty...Hate
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 11:05:58 PM AEST
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Nice release of the ill flow.
The Wind.... |
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