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Pour It On
Contributed by
merry
on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hot and cold water perfectly blended
Fill the tub to the rim
Sloshing gently
When I step in
Steam rises like mist
Whispering over my skin
The smell of green tea
Fragrant and inviting
Sinking into the depths
Let go of everything today has been
Sigh of contentment escapes me
Let the heat seep into my bones
Pouring water over my head
Running like hot silk
Dissolving me into itself
Eyes the color of water
Open halfway to watch
Water streaming
O'er my breasts
Copyright ©
merry
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2003-09-14 08:05:00]
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Re: Pour It On
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:16:22 AM AEST
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| ooh yesss I agree :)I love bubblebaths with candlelight and a nice italian red.A very relaxing write..Thank you |
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Re: Pour It On
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by roisin on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 10:41:54 AM AEST
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ohhhh yessss!!!!! brilliant!!!...you've brought back memories of not so long ago of those gorgeous jasmine green tea baths at the local sento...so sensual, luxurious and indulgent...hmmmmmm...
ta rosie |
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Re: Pour It On
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 01:01:13 PM AEST
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Loved the poem! True- nothing heals like a good bath
Great writing!
Love Joy and Peace,
Jellybellyprincess |
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Re: Pour It On
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:12:44 PM AEST
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Wow...I think I need a bath!! This was very good..
Jenni |
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Re: Pour It On
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by venkat on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 03:51:07 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful..venkat |
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Re: Pour It On
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by Hooligan785 on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 03:24:29 AM AEST
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| I like this poem..It is relaxing |
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