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Which way out?
Contributed by
lostforgood
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Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sitting in my little room
It is my lonely little tomb
There's 2 doors out of this world
One to the kitchen to pick out a knife
The other to the bathroom to swallow more pills
I suppose I could stay here in my box
And make myself become more lost
Three choices is all I have
I have to wonder which choice I'd choose
Even though I know no matter what
Death will give its kiss to me soon
Copyright ©
lostforgood
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2003-09-14 22:05:00]
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Re: Which way out?
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by emystar on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 12:42:35 AM AEST
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Very, very sad but I can relate to these types of feelings.
Hang tuff.
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
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Re: Which way out?
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by EmSal on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 01:58:37 AM AEST
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I hope you can somehow make another way out that is not toward deaths kiss. Sad write but an awesome one.
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Re: Which way out?
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 06:34:42 PM AEST
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sad, hope you feel better now.
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Re: Which way out?
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by Merry on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 10:20:49 PM AEST
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well perhaps we are kindred spirits in our deep and abiding sadness - i just wrote a suicide poem myself - sucks to feel this way doesn't it. I don't ususally give in to it - but then every once in while life jumps up and blindsides you a good one up side the head and sends you reeling to the floor - that's the day I had - on top of the past couple of weeks being very emotionally difficult.
I like your poem fits my mood so perfectly tonight - hope you are feeling better
not so
merry |
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