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Right Where I Belong
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
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Ive been listening to myself again,as my conscience screams and yells
There's something that I need to say,a sadness that I should tell
Yet words are truly failing me,I guess the shame's too much to bear
I'm afraid I'll lose your loving ways,and you'll no longer care
So unlike my nature,I overstepped the forbidden line
And now I'm tortured with reminders,pounding in my mind
I can't go on pretending,smiling,and making believe
When here beneath the surface,I have sinned and now I grieve
When the moment comes to calling,when you hear my tainted words
Please don't protect my feelings,give me what I deserve
I have wronged and Im ashamed,never before have I known
The sickening feeling of betrayal,as my conscience calls me home
I don't deserve your understanding,for I know you will try
To see a way to excuse,the when,what,where and why
Do not see the way I was,see me as I stand today
The one who sinned and tainted love,get mad,that's okay
I expect no more than silence,no less than you walking out
Just punish me as you see fit,but please,please dont shout
For in all the time you've loved me,never has your voice been raised
But then again,who ever thought,I'd ever do you this way
So go ahead,shout at me,turn your back,I'll understand
For treating you the way I have,ruining all our plans
I'll not rationalize my actions,I'll only say that they were wrong
And I know that here in misery,is right where I belong
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LovingWhispers
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:10:11 PM AEST
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AAHH This was very deep,but well done!
I see your heart bleeding in this,Take care.
So much feeling went into this peice!
Christina |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by Trisha on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:34:24 PM AEST
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| wow girl this is really long and i can't believe you write this long peom this is good |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:39:45 PM AEST
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| Such terrible guilt, such agony of the soul. I know in my heart this man forgives you. Believe me, his love for you in endless. Ray F |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by emystar on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 12:27:03 AM AEST
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vERY GOOD WORK. iT TAKES A REALL PERSON TO STAND UP AND ADMIT THEIR WRONGS.
Take it easy on yourself as we all mess up in a half a dozen ways or the other.
PEACE, JOY, LUV, 4 GIVENESS,
emy |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 12:45:25 AM AEST
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Outstanding write.... takes a lot of woman to write this...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 01:08:23 AM AEST
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very well written, strong
Shari |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by venkat on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 01:44:36 AM AEST
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| Great poem.. you seem to be in the midst of a hurricane of emotional feelings... venkat |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 01:49:15 AM AEST
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| I truly hope you can work things out ... this poem shows how much you truly love him ... I know things will be ok ... great write ... Jan |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by Crow on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 03:08:21 AM AEST
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| my troubles seem small, if there is something I can do, crow |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by Merry on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 12:25:38 PM AEST
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very passionate write - hope things will work out - love conquers all -
merry |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by Fwog on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:06:37 AM AEST
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Hi LovingWhispers,
Wow where does one begin, this is a mindblowing write. The depth of your pain is heartwrenching. Sorry for repeating myself but I am totally blown away.
I wish you love.
Ciao |
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Re: Right Where I Belong
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by PoloRM on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:12:02 PM AEST
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If you belong there then we all do
We've all had moments to see through
But truth should be told
And secrets unfold
Otherwise love can not be true. |
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