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Abandon - Relinguish
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
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Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
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The sweet melody...
The souls remedy...
The gentle words....
The shattered...
Relinquish to the thunder..
Abandon to the sound....
Give in to the wonder...
Listen as your ears pound....
Its so hard to bare
Your heart in my hands
Longing to caress it, do I dare?
Your so naked in my hands...
The soul wasnt meant to heal,
Not after that,
And now its so hard to deal,
The skin is rotting black....
The sweet melody...
The souls remedy...
The gentle words....
The shattered...
Relinquish to the thunder..
Abandon to the sound....
Give in to the wonder...
Listen as your ears pound....
And its so hard to handle,
The world cant see,
The little light you get from a flickering candle....
Dont let it go out, though you long to breathe...
Youve done nothing wrong, but the world wants you to suffer,
So you grow thicker skin, stronger, harder, tougher...
And now you cant feel,
You cant tell whats real,
And now its so hard to deal...
Because the skin is rotting black...
The sweet melody...
The souls remedy...
The gentle words....
The shattered...
Relinquish to the thunder..
Abandon to the sound....
Give in to the wonder...
Listen as your ears pound....
The skin is rotting black...
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Re: Abandon - Relinguish
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 12:22:38 PM AEST
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| this is excellent - the repetition is very effective and the language makes it seem almost lyrical. i've been waiting for you to post something new, i always enjoy reading your work. great imagery in this. keep them coming, Kate x |
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