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Fractured
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Why do I bother trying?
When you dont try at all.
Why is our relationship dying?
I bet youre hoping it will fall...
Theres no more time for me,
Your biggest personal mistake,
And you dont give anymore,
Because in your misconception all I do is take.
But Spirit, tell me why she cant see...
Im about to break...
Youre supposed to care,
Youre supposed to understand,
Youre supposed to love,
And youre supposed to hold my hand...
This misconception is love....
But why?
Why cant you see - all *you* really do is take,
Youre blinded by your misconception,
But you cant see that Im about to break...
I dont need this *****,
Look me in the eye,
Now its the road Im going to hit,
Because if I stay here, Ill die...
I feel like a rat in a cage,
You keep taunting me,
And theres no outlet for my rage,
But in the end, youll see...
All you do is take, and its causing me to break...
But youre too dense for that,
I know you dont give a crap,
See how much you like it when Im not here anymore,
Even if you wont let me leave, Ill find a way out,
No matter how...
I said Im sorry for the pain Ive caused you,
I said Im sorry for being in your way,
Im sorry for being such a burden,
How much more do you want me to say?
Im such a problem, you know its true,
Then why wont you let me leave,
Why wont you let me be rid of you?
Because you cant see me, you cant see my fracture,
You cant see how this smile is manufactured,
And you cant see the warm blood leaking from my cold heart...
That blood isnt yours, your blood isnt mine,
If youd just let me go I know Id be fine...
But you cant see that all you do is take...
And that its because of you, that Im about to break....
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2003-09-15 13:05:00]
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Re: Fractured
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 12:49:01 AM AEST
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It is worded perfectly. Such an emotional draining poem, I absolutely loved it. Excellent write here. I wish for you to do whatever you need for you as you said in your poem your blood isn't his/hers its yours. Best wishes.
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