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This is Your Breakup Card
Contributed by
TeenageEmoGirl
on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You're flawed and you're fake
And guiltless for putting my life at stake
Ran out of cash so you gamble my heart
Is it better to fold than to play?
Play it safe and wait, or
Roll the dice and lose it all
In a game of chance
A bloody romance
Words you used so appealing
While the dealer's dealing
Me my fate
Should I play it safe and wait?
Should I fold like before?
Help me out with this hand
Help me out with this bet
Don't you remember my face?
You said you'd never forget
Me, I was your everything
And you just threw "everything" away
I understand I'm of no worth to you
But why won't you stay?
Pity me beautiful, make me feel
Anything but okay
I deserve anything but okay
Gambled away my heart
Left it all to chance
While I cried alone
With relief you shared a dance
And what a relief it must have been
To finally get rid of me
I knew it was too good to be true
Because I could never be
Happy with another
Flawed to your every touch
Surrenderless to your every word
God I hate your name so much
And now I sit and I reflect
Why you no longer call
Why you decided I wasn't good enough
But I know I did nothing wrong at all
There's just one thing you need to know, you need to see
That you've still got a special part of me
My heart shattered by your hand
The cards scattered on your floor
For in this game of self-regret
I fold again once more
Copyright ©
TeenageEmoGirl
... [
2003-09-15 22:05:00]
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Re: This is Your Breakup Card
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by EmSal on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 10:20:11 PM AEST
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Oh wow this poem is absolutely awesome. Your words mean everything to me. Thank you so much for sharing. Excellent write.
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Re: This is Your Breakup Card
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by jaeann on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 10:47:22 PM AEST
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| really really good......... |
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Re: This is Your Breakup Card
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 12:09:36 AM AEST
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Really good write.....
Jenni |
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Re: This is Your Breakup Card
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 01:23:15 AM AEST
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U go girl! Guess u got him told.
Good work here even tho I'm sure it was painfull to write about but very healing.
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: This is Your Breakup Card
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 03:34:40 AM AEST
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excellent write!!!!!!
rosie |
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Re: This is Your Breakup Card
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 06:48:11 AM AEST
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Hey girl, it's mizcrazybobo here, I just can't be bothered logging myself in lol. Anyhowz this is an amazing write, that, once again I luv and can relate to. Hope everythings going allright for u anyhow. Talk to ya lata dude
mizcrazybobo |
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Re: This is Your Breakup Card
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by painted_echos on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:59:01 AM AEST
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| here, you have made something beautiful of your sorrow. thank you for sharing. and you may have folded this time...but you know, eventually your going to draw a royal flush! your writing reveals a kind heart, and that's what your winning hand will see and love. feel better. m |
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Re: This is Your Breakup Card
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th October 2003 @ 07:54:58 PM AEST
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| ashley i love you! |
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