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My creator……................
Contributed by
chard
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Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My creator..
Please forgive me, for my teenage misbehavior..
Instead of showing appreciation. I showed frustration & anger.
But still you stood by, watching for misguidance & danger.
Dad how can I ever repay ya??!!?
I know!!!
Im going use all the insight, you gave me to grow!!
Into a thoroughbred Blackman that fends for himself....
I remember / Me / causing heat / out in the street!! A Young cat with a smooth technique..
Flaming tree's with my peeps.. You couldn't tell me ***** / I stood like a Sphinx!!
A little street credibility I thought I was made!! Thought I was paid!!
Thought I lead a life in the shade!!
But then reality / charged at me / stuck in a rage!!
Rearranged my whole way of thinking!!
Wordz you said in the past.....Dad, they started blinking!!
My own ***** I cant believe it, see it, started stinking!!
I gotta give it up Pops. The knowledge you dropped.. it Strengthened heart..
-You gave me the tools I need to live & fight off these sharks!!
-You gave me the gift to write becuz this poetry's art!!
I owe the world to you Pop....So I'll strive non-stop..
Until I skirrrrrrtt a "Merc. drop" for you, into ya parking spot!!!
Your my creator....THERE IS NO OTHER MORTAL SOUL GREATER...!!!
We stand tall and form like Voltron with you as leader!!
Even when you had to beat us...
We knew that it was all love.
We never went a day or night without grub..
You provided Fresh clothes, you never dressed us like scrubs...
Thank you Lord, for sending him from above!
Damn I wish that I can give you a hug!
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chard
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2003-09-15 22:35:00]
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Re: My creator……................
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 01:28:45 AM AEST
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Very good work.
I'm sure he's proud of this and u.
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
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