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Only When I'm Dead
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don't wanna be read
only when I'm dead
book jacket says I'm sick in the head
stuck all day in bed
all I see is red
forget to be fed
but I don't wanna be read
only when I'm dead
so they can see how Ted
messed with the little girl's head
and how Ed
reminded me that anger was red
because i don't wanna be read
only when I'm dead
after all I've ever said
I'm just a simple girl wed
a soul full of lead
gagged on the broken bread
look where I was always led
to a room full of dread
I can't be only read
once I'm dead
all I endured from Fred
everything he said
in his bed
where he tread
as he watched all the red
the little girl bled
too much needs to be said
so much still trapped in my head
I still see all the red
need to purge every room of dread
once all the shadows have fled
and the laden soul has been shed
I'll rise from the bed
with a clearer head
because I don't want it to ever be said
she was only read
after she was dead.
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jaeann
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2003-09-16 14:35:00]
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Re: Only When I'm Dead
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 05:55:05 PM AEST
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Reading you now, and holy cow...
good write I like your style
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Re: Only When I'm Dead
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 05:59:55 PM AEST
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wow very unique I like this a lot. What do u mean by a book jacket though. Once again loved this and the ryhme scheme was funky to say the least.
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Re: Only When I'm Dead
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 09:27:53 PM AEST
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Yeah..I agree with Joel ..It is funky ;)
as for..
"book jacket says I'm sick in the head"
Does this mean..dont judge a book by its cover???Just a wandering guess *smiles*
No matter though..coz I like it |
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Re: Only When I'm Dead
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 11:04:55 PM AEST
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I will answer your plea my friend.
You are being read right now.....and it's not the end!
You have so much to offer......you have so much to say.....how can you get through this day, without sharing with us all?
Your poetry is so special, carefully said, thought about pen held tall!
When your picture falls, Jaymee....you may be just a poet, but everyone is going ot know it!
lovingcritters
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Re: Only When I'm Dead
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 07:13:30 AM AEST
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| the feelings of anger, pain and sadness all expressed with an emotional voice in this beautiful write. very good flow. venkat |
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