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THE MIST
Contributed by
Hamp
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Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Somewhere in time
The furture's mist
I see two hands
In just a whisp
They're shriveled and bent
Yet clasped so tight
Before the hands
A shining light.
One hand fades
The other's alone
But soon it fades
As if going home
Again they clasp
Forever this time
The hands I see
Are yours and mine
8-30-1999
Copyright ©
Hamp
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2003-09-16 16:05:00]
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Re: THE MIST
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 08:36:47 PM AEST
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| omg....how lovely.....reverant....i feel hushed by the love you have for her.....wow....i see those images....of your hands....clasped forever in love....in union....not to be morbid....but the whole image i get is of a beautiful tribute in a cemetary.....just simply peaceful love......... |
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Re: THE MIST
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:52:12 PM AEST
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Hamp, what a marvelous way to say
I've loved you all these years and always will
Our hands are clasped together and even when they aren't we'll still be together.
How lovely, exquisite delight from the heart!
How I loved reading your romantic but meaningful write.
lovingcritters |
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Re: THE MIST
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 02:27:48 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc... lovely, romantic write... congratulations to you both..
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