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Dangerously In Love
Contributed by
Ruby1987
on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She couldn't think, She couldn't cry,
The sun had exchanged shifts with the rains,
So she embraced the icy cold winds and inhaled,
She held him tight but she could feel him slipping
The bullet pierced deep within his heart,
And with the rain his blood trickled down the sidewalk,
Through his eyes she saw his life un-write itself,
And she listened to his lips stutter the words "to dangerously in love"
Ashamed parents pulled her away from him,
For she brang disgrace to their religon and name,
She watched as he fell to a side and closed his eyes,
He died fighting to be with her he was ****** Dangerouly in love
Unable to put her murderer of a father behind bars,
She tried to press on with her meaningless life,
4 days into her arranged marriage she found her fathers gun,
7 hours later she was descovered dead on a young mans grave
She was dangerously in love
Copyright ©
Ruby1987
... [
2003-09-16 20:05:00]
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Re: Dangerously In Love
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 08:45:49 PM AEST
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| This was great! The theme was fantastic..I totally got into it. :) |
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Re: Dangerously In Love
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by hazelnut on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:35:51 AM AEST
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| sent shivers up my spine |
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Re: Dangerously In Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 04:05:17 PM AEST
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Powerful stuff that love, they should put it in a perfume bottle and only let people have little sniffs- almost a catergory A drug!
Excellent write.
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