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No Control
Contributed by
EmSal
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Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I cover my face and breathe in deep,
My sanity I have to keep.
There is no way I want to give in to this feat,
Ive already been that crumpled heap.
I stay that way breathing so deep for so long,
Suddenly someone who may care asks me whats wrong?
I was in tears and whispered, I can feel myself start to go,
Im having a panic attack, wait til Im low.
I looked at my fist through blurry eyes so tight.
Suddenly going to faint, my mind so light.
My body, mind and emotion start to fight.
Convulsions of panic win with its frightening might.
Now on the ground so far away,
On cold concrete with my mind closed is where I lay.
All those people, not hearing a word they say,
Unconsciousness is now where I stray.
I wake up to the sound of people crying.
I suppose there is no use in lying,
This isnt my first attack I must be dieing.
I shut my eyes and fade from the sighing.
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EmSal
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2003-09-17 09:05:00]
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Re: No Control
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:49:28 AM AEST
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Wow... that's pretty intense. I've seen people have anxiety attacks and it's kinda scary. Hope you find peace.
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Re: No Control
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 11:49:49 AM AEST
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Very vividly described. Do you still get these anxiety attacks?
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Re: No Control
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:46:16 PM AEST
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| i know this feeling all too well......may you find some peace and light.......elusive as they may seem........all the same......i send it...... |
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Re: No Control
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:47:37 PM AEST
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this is an astounding poem; intriguing, frightening and beautiful all at once. Hope you're alright.
x_x_x |
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Re: No Control
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 08:08:13 PM AEST
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this was so so good. So vivid it was so real. Intense wow...
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