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Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 03:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You gently kneel behind her,
encompassing a woman in your arms.
Dark paths so forbidding,
you wonder the strength thats held.
The softest touch seems to make
you, more than you really are.
Still her haven,
a night in from the cold.
Her voice still lingers,
what she lives has set you aside.
Not once had she offered.
Not once had she cried..........Crow
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2003-09-18 03:45:00]
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 03:48:23 AM AEST
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Your style is so tender and beautiful. Great poem!
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 04:11:39 AM AEST
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Im never quite sure what exactly you bring me to the brink of..but its always something that pulls me in and stays with me..Comforts me and moves me.Teaches me and soothes me.
Yes Goose..tender :) |
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 05:15:37 AM AEST
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breathtaking talks straight to the soul ever so beautifully and lifts the spirits
Shari |
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:25:02 PM AEST
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| i can see the gentleness......feel it through your words.......she kneels caressed......... |
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by Merry on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:42:45 PM AEST
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Crow - this is very intense -spellbinding and yes so very tender
nice write
merry |
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 01:08:20 PM AEST
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Fellow feeling Crow....you always have so much empathy and kindness....but then there is the mystery...always mystifys me....I'm never sure where you take me Crow....but I enjoy your writes because they make me think and wonder so?!
Lovingcritters
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 02:15:09 PM AEST
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Simply haunting and mesmerizing as much of your work is!The flow is write/right on! ;-)
Angel always.......godspeed..joni
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by venkat on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 04:49:04 AM AEST
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| mmm...great.. very intense....venkat |
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