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The Crow
Contributed by
avarice_riot
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Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 05:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Leaving darkness
Mocking madness
The crow
Calls for silence
Wings like night
sky and blindness
Does not fly
But perches on
shadow's gloom
To watch
the night die.
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2003-09-18 05:25:00]
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Re: The Crow
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 06:00:29 AM AEST
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I have one too!! damnest noise I ever heard.
this is a very cool write. Crow |
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Re: The Crow
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 06:30:36 AM AEST
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Yes a neat write
The crow is a wise and knowing creature.Listen to him..He's telling you something ;) |
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Re: The Crow
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 06:37:10 AM AEST
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| LOL .. good write ... there are many crows squawking in our backyard ... others around us are bothered by them, but I would rather hear a bird than a whole lot of traffic ;) but this is a well written poem nonetheless ... Jan |
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Re: The Crow
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 07:08:11 AM AEST
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Love this!!! Give the crow a breadk!! lmao...
Jenni |
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Re: The Crow
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 01:00:53 PM AEST
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Great write Crow....had one like that in Colorado....finally decided if he wouldn't leave I'd make friend with him.....that was wrong...I had a parakeet that began to imiate him then I had a crow in the house and one in the tree....pretty soon i could go t sleep with them both cawing! *smiles*
Loved this crow....different than your usual, but really cute!
lovingcritters
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Re: The Crow
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by OpalDragon on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 01:52:33 PM AEST
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good write ... but they may have a message try listening
OD
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Re: The Crow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 02:03:15 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. Love it. Keep writing you are very talented. |
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Re: The Crow
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by Ronald on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 04:44:17 AM AEST
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| This poem is so cute :-) |
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