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Nothingness
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 07:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It's dark and I retire into myself,
My thought is taken away by the wind.
It's a background music to the rhythm
Of the breaking waves, to breathing.
Why is this world so gloomy,
The dark labyrinth is consuming me,
No madness because I feel,
Nothingness, I feel you inside me
Copyright ©
cant-skate
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2003-09-18 07:45:00]
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Re: Nothingness
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 11:18:46 AM AEST
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Oh, how well I know that feeling. It's the worst when you're laying in bed in the dark and the silence with nothing else to do but think and feel until you fall into blessed sleep. Maybe that's why I don't sleep at night much anymore... this is another great write, and I can relate so much.
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Re: Nothingness
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by OpalDragon on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 01:42:38 PM AEST
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great write been there
OD |
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Re: Nothingness
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 05:39:41 AM AEST
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| I can totally relate. Well done. |
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