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Harboring
Contributed by
isaiyan
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Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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do you ask God for your perfection?
the questions gets no timely answer
leads you to all types of regret
makes me think of my embarrassed futures
and if i have a chance to win it
damned, dirty sovern state
insie of me and it starts again
this is no battle that i can win
i'm telling you this truth
that i've become this lost and decietful soul.
my soul is lost, wandering
trying to find its keeper in this dark world
but this makes no type of sense to me
why and what i'm harboring
ask me
its killing me
inside me
something i can't control
something i don't even want to know
something i want to change
help me
i can't see
dirty all this weight is smothering me
make my thoughts go away
Copyright ©
isaiyan
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2003-09-18 09:45:00]
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Re: Harboring
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 02:15:47 AM AEST
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| it sounds like a poetic whimper for wanting a better life... creative, i like it. sounds like a place i've been battered down into before. good write! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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